it is the underside of leaves
where true tenderness lies
untouched by relentless sun
huddle in canopy disguise
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with an affinity for the strength of stem
an organic parasol shade
veined chlorophyll lattice
tangled in web palisade
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it is here where you will find me
frail skin caressed by caterpillar
and although i no longer see the sky
droplet reflections comfort the eye
the value of a fallen tear
glistens, revealing the blue
on shimmered surface tension
of diffident dew
Just wow! What a silken beauty of a feeling of your poem! And then there is this hidden power in appreciating the beauty of the unseen sky in the droplet that reflects it. The fallen tear carries a similar strength and beauty. I am amazed at what you did here!
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Oh I’m so happy to receive your wonderful comment Pragalbha โค
I was intrigued by the theme of shielding the self…. yet still being able to see the beauty of existence even through sadness. The value of tears!
I truly value you xo
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So beautiful …I think with this explanation the poem became more clear to me. The words ‘relentless sun’ did remind me of a time when I wanted to stay protected from any brightness or clarity as it felt overwhelming to ‘see’ anymore …and yes I also recognize the sadness and the beauty through it.
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Thank you so much!!๐
I surely recognize a fellow empath in you, sweet soul, and your words once more confirm this. It is such a fine balance of reveal and withdraw with us as we move from the harsh light of the everyday to the comforting shade. But I wouldnโt have it any other way ๐๐น
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Your recognition is a comfort to my soul. I too wouldn’t have it any other way …yet go through tender phases of wanting respite, because the only way to comfort seems cracking open a bit more to fall deeper within.
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How your words resonate!! That last sentence has a tragic yet profoundly beautiful truth to it. I hope when the cracks are opening you are able to find shelter despite the pressing demands of the everyday. If just that a fragile epidermal layer can at least seal and contain that beautiful heart of yours …
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Thank you so much my heart friend for your knowing words ๐ I think I am very blessed to be given the time and space to be in this process – to be separate from everyday life, while living in it – I feel no other choice anyway. Trusting that we are supported and held through it all ๐
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As lovely as ever, Diana. Tender as the underside of leaves (great idea!) and fragile like a butterfly sipping a raindrop or a tear.
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Oh how lovely a thought, I had to speak it out loud!!
That summer weary butterfly deserves a stanza all of her own. Love to you dear Basilike ๐ … and thank you always!
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You too have my love, Diana!
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So great to read you again.โค๏ธโค๏ธ
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Dear lady, having you read me is motivation enough … although my creativity drips rather than pours … hugs from afar Vivaciously Valiant One ๐โค๏ธ
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This is a interdisciplinary, Your writing style is most uniqueโฆ. shimmered surface tenstionโฆ last few lines are best. Physics and botanyโฆ happy to read this dianaโฆ
I missed your posts..
Keep writing ๐๐
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I get a kick out of mixing science and words as you know dear Akshay! So grateful that you commented ๐น๐๐
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That’s absolutely perfect way…. hey I’m grateful to read such a beautiful composition of Science and words. Sorry missed your posts.
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And you deserve your Sunshine Blogger award because you always spread sunshine when you visit ๐ โ๏ธ
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Ha ha thank you for such a compliment..
I’m really blessed to hear.. ๐๐
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Science and emotions weaved into poetry. You have brought science into arts. Beautifully done.
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Welcome! And thank you for such a nice first comment ๐
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You are welcome
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Lovely, you give us a word picture and feeling of the usually unseen side of the leaf!
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You are such a loyal reader not to mention sweetheart ๐Valerie!
I remember once I placed my cellphone under a branch to use the โselfieโ function to photograph the underside of leaves. It was a cool effect!
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I bet it was…it is always the unseen parts of nature that are the most spectacular!
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Yes! And just when we think weโve seen it all, more intricate beauty is revealed. Itโs all around us Valerie. Hope you are having a lovely relaxing evening ๐๐น
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You too!
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So vivid dear friend. Beautifully composed as always. ๐
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I was so pleased to receive such a warm compliment Ricardo …. check out this smile ๐๐๐
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You are very welcome Diana. ๐ And in turn your reply made me smile too. ๐
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Love this! I can visualize this vividly!
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Wow! Hooray!! Finally you arrive on my blog dear D ๐น๐๐
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Delicately penned to reflect a delicate state of mind.
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I really enjoyed exposing the vulnerability we are prone to V.J. Thanks for your words ๐น๐
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My pleasure
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from the comfort of home, I’m moved to branch out… find myself on a leaf and be transformed… You are beautiful Lady Di and with such beauty you capture and express in way that leave us readers in awe.
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Oh you are beyond kind, dear soul. What a lovely feeling as a writer to be able to express and be artful … and receive acknowledgment. Itโs the pinnacle of bliss, ever grateful xx ๐โค๏ธ
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I remember this picture and am moved by the poetry it accompanies! This is beyond beautiful for me, and relatable too. I always love how your first verse is simple in its beauty but the layers branch out into magnificent magnanimous metaphors as one moves further. Your poetry is a blessing to me Diana.. It really is ๐๐๐
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So enriched by your praises my dear friend … โmagnificent magnanimous metaphorsโ is a lofty alliteration that has my head spinning! Quick, blood sugar must be low … where is my emergency stash of cocoa infused sugar. Oh yes, used it last night… ๐
But not to make light of your beautiful comment, in all seriousness, I appreciate your words so very much! ๐ค๐๐โค๏ธ
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Oh but how uncomfortable it is! No wonder so many turn their leaves away… Lovely work, thank you, G
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Sweet G, your words bring a sense of sublime contentment in me! Hugs from the Pacific Rim โค
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What wondrous love is this, O my soul! You have carried me away with this one, Diana. To see Life’s delicate imprint and then the power of the tear that comes to it and shows it itself: love, beauty, depth. Magnificent.
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And this is a prized comment dear Amaya … I shall remember it for sometime ….so grateful when you read me sweet soul!
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Your words dance, Diana. I think you should enter these in competitions, if you don’t already.
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Never thought of that Robbie, and to tell you the truth, your words are like winning a contest ๐
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Inspiring and utterly beautiful writing
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Such potent words… that have me smiling and very appreciative of you, kind soul!
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This has a beautiful flow that speaks of the hidden beauty of nature in the most affectionate way possible. Great work!
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Oh Laura, your comments mean a lot to me! And I just read your “Cold Death” … wow, the visuals! Such good work but I did not find the comments available so thought I’d mention my admiration right here ๐
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Thank you Diana, it means so much to me that you like my work.
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Keep writing! I look forward to reading you ๐๐น
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Beautiful!
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Deep curtsy sweet Eric! I hope all is well with you ๐
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This is one of many reasons why I love you!
You have a perspective as you forge your world around it. You have an infallible approach to see beauty beyond beauty. This poem is complete in itself, not just for the lyrical stance, the words, the theme but also for portraying such unorthodox eye of you! I love it for I get to know you more through this……
This caught my attention and I cannot help but applaud…….
“and although i no longer see the sky
droplet reflections comfort the eye”
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And here, with your carefully chosen words Shefali, you not only honour me with the choice accolades but also reach out to my vulnerable side with the softest kid gloves.
Thank you for making my time on WP so meaningful and rewarding …. for since day one this is another of the reasons I love you in return …… dear poet x
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Very beautiful!
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Oh you are incredibly kind dear Sharon! ๐
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Once again, I am blown away by your word choice and your imagery!
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I am like…Oh My! What can I say when I read your poetry. Every word, every syllable revolts against my whim to write a beautiful comment; for they are not enough to shower praises and love for your poetry prowess.
Until next time when again I will be blown away by you and be searching for those little words to say something!! Have an amazing day dear friend..
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I think your glowing words imparted an extra dose of good vibes on my day Ritwik! It was full of Sunday sunshine and smiles.
Thank you so much … your comments are collectible and will be read again dear friend ๐ธ๐
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I really love the way you interpret the world with your eye and heart, Diana! Beautiful!
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Oh Pete! You invariably cheer me up with your thoughtfulness. Have a fabulous day!
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You are welcome, glad to, and have a wonderful day yourself there dear Diana! ๐
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This is such a delicate form of writing which takes the reader to a vivid journey as they see themselves resting in the underside of the leaves and the solace it brings.
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an organic parasol shade
veined chlorophyll lattice
tangled in web palisade
love the natural flow –
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Is there anything finer than having your own words written back … wow! Happy you are here Eco! ๐
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The underside of a leaf… great idea:)
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Thanks dear Kae … it came to me during a forest romp when I placed my cellphone under a leaf .. in selfie mode haha! Crazy dame moment!
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LOVE IT!!!!:)
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