125 thoughts on “Shiver”

      1. Yay! A name reveal..! Pleased to meet you Kelsey 😊 Any day is a good day when I can squeeze in poetry, and talking to wonderful folk …πŸ’œπŸŒΈ

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  1. the dark unveils red, of what your white heart needs to be filled with love….
    ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀

    "illuminating this night

    with our

    perfect

    sin"

    You so romantic at heart , how you make words high full of romance. I am inebriated.
    Such a sensual piece… so fine… so apt…. so enraging a sin of longing within…

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    1. No less than ten flaming hearts to welcome my eyes!
      Oh, what sweet sight is this!?

      Then drink from my cup of longing, and may the elixir quell your thirst for a moment…until you take your next languid breath…
      β™₯️

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  2. A piece of desires and love. This is so full of love. I was flowing with the flow of your words. It illuminated my heart. What an amazing intricate weaving of words ❀️
    And the picture is perfect ❀️❀️❀️ serene and surreal at the same time.

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    1. Sweet Priya, what a divine reaction πŸ’•
      Time and time again, your genuine warmth and enthusiasm bathe me. Like the refreshing lake waters on a summer’s day.
      How lucky am I to be blessed with your attention 🌹🌹❀️❀️

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      1. I am more to have that honour to read your precious words sweetheart.
        Your words have a pull.
        Love.
        PS: The character I wrote, Jasper, whom you searched on internet, is back,telling his beginning,I thought you would like to read. 😍😍

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  3. Can the expression of such desires ever be a sin ? You render the black unto dust, yet your pale is absorbed, I’m left with the question who is seducing who, or if the black signifies an unsuitable partner but the desire is too great ,and yet at the end we’re told of such a perfect melding of wants fulfilled that it matters not. As fascinating as it is beautiful Diana.

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    1. Hmm, you make me think that I was confused as I wrote. Perhaps as confused as one can be be when they lose control at lust’s coronation! Oooo. I like that. I can feel a tumbler a comin’ hehe. Thanks dear Nigel for your (ever) wonderful comments!

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    1. Hold on, I was still basking in *Trial of the Heart*. Your ploy to divert me shall only work momentarily …. shall I again mention how much I enjoyed it!

      ….but three “stunnings” have me cheering here … this is so sweet of you to say Isha ❀

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      1. Hahahha, oh my, you’ve driven me to cloud 9 today! ☁🌈 I don’t know what to say! And from someone who writes like you do, Diana, it means all the more! πŸ“

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      2. And you stay up on that cloud, dear lady – my opinion is just a single voice but a very enthusiastic one when when it comes to your writing. Methinks you might not know how good you are! Here in my words is a mirror to show you πŸ™‚

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    1. Oh! Here are some scented tissues to dab away the little cheek puddles. You so deserve attention dear lady. I think your writing is really something. πŸŒΉπŸ’•

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  4. Splendid Diana!! This is perfection at its best.. ❀️ The image is so apt. Perhaps this is the power of your words that fabricated the image as you wielded your pen… I had goosebumps!!πŸ€—πŸ˜ Another feather to your marvelous writings!πŸ‘β€οΈπŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ€—πŸ€—

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      1. Aww!! ❀️ You deserve it!
        Or something that that!πŸ˜›πŸ™ˆπŸ˜‰ Too abstract for me to conjecture .. but I will let my mind lose wild πŸ˜›πŸ€£
        You’re most welcome ☺️☺️ and you are the best!!πŸ™πŸ™πŸ€—

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      2. Two bests make a …. bestest lol! Another made up word from the sense of elation when I read you dear man. Have a great day Parth πŸ’—πŸ’—

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      1. Oh, you are charming me and I’m enjoying it! Hope some fresh writing inspiration arrives with you shortly…although reading can be so rewarding also! Such ingenuity and variety on WP.

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  5. Aaaaaah so beautiful, seems to be carrying me to clouds to you, to watch this beautiful scene.
    I can imagine every part of sky rejoice seeing you dancing at your whim,
    Your light mixing, joining, colliding and creating something, which I would call a “Heavenly Sin”

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    1. I really thrive on the thought you place into your comments Nancy ❀️ It’s lovely to think that as long as the servers stand, and WP exists I can look back and marvel at your kindness.
      And only a truly beautiful soul could conjure such warmth and admiration. So mutual my dear β™₯️β™₯️🌷🌷🌷

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      1. You always bring out the rare kind of goofy smiles on my face Diana my love. And you make me believe as if we were not of this century but at the time of Shakespeare and such, using all the extravaganza in our speeches of love as we do and the long exclamations of everlasting love.
        I wonder what it would ve if ever you, me and Priya are asked to write a play. It surely would be something so adorable yet hilarious filled with wit of, us all three, who appear innocent on the outside but are for sure mischief inside.

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      2. Oh how you entertain me with your words, joy and perfect flight of fancy! A play with out mixed styles and moods would be hilarious but certainly artful and conducive of great cheer. With unlimited declarations of love!! πŸ’—
        You don’t really think me innocent do you…? Hehe 😈❀️

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      3. Ofcourse and ofcourse I don’t love. The only thing innocent about you is your affections, rest assured I know you will fit the crew wholeheartedly coz who says we are innocent? Maybe we could be worse than you. 😜❀️

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      4. A bunch of cheeky pirates we are, with mischief and mayhem afoot. And you can be the lady captain!
        You would smile at me right now … I am starting to watch a Bollywood film β€œBride and Prejudice” on Netflix haha. Set in Amritsar… yes… β€œBride” lol 😜

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      5. Hahaha wow am hearing about this movie for the first time πŸ˜‚. Epic choice of name. And ofcourse am smiling seeing your response Miss Pirate. Or laughing you could say. 😝

        Enjoy your movie and do lemme also know wts it about 😬

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      6. I sure will Pirate Nancy hehe! A romantic comedy full of beautiful colour and wonderful music. I πŸ’— India! And you 😘😘

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      7. Oh how wonderful a conversation this is! You are not a measly fish, you are a delicate mermaid with the tongue of such a sea angel! πŸ’—

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      8. Hahaha oh my I think by the end of this conversation we might have dragged half the sea creatures here my jellyfish. In front of your beauty, charm and wit even a shark can act whipped. Whom am I to act otherwise.
        And well the voice of sea angels is nothing if it can’t serve in front of the sea goddess.
        In your humble service my lady. ❀️

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      9. You are something! I’m laughing at the dialogue and at the same time shaking my head with your fab witty retorts. I can visualize all the sea creatures in the beach now, stranded … but from an incredible Nancy Bella tidal wave. Whoosh. Then … a crab runs up to my toes and tickles them. Thanks for the funnest thread imaginable o faithful one! πŸ’—πŸ’—

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      10. Well now I am laughing my ass off as well and thinking if my mom comes she ll think I have gone full mad, half I already was. πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
        Btw I am afraid of crabs so thank god it went to you only. Hahahaha. Actually I think I would run at the sight of small fishes approaching me as well.

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      11. Can you imagine if she asked to read this thread! She would say β€œwho is your crazy Canadian friend” … and you might answer, err β€œqueen of our pirate crew”.
        Don’t worry by the way … I can handle the fish and sea creatures .. but you must deal with any errant spiders πŸ•· 😱😱

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      12. Lol, she won’t understand half of our gibberish. And even if she does she would know its not you but I whose the crazy initiator of such conversations. What she actually might doubt is if I am flirting with a guy or not smiling like I do, Indian moms are cute and predictable like that πŸ˜‚πŸ˜œ

        And baby, spiders, are you crazy, i would rather run out of the room, if I can’t I would start shouting for my mom, granny or anyone for that matter to kill it. Trust me I can shake the whole house even at midnight if its spiders, rats or bees.
        Also if the situation becomes dire I ll have my chappals(i.e. Slippers) as my protective weapon.

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      13. Oh how you entertain me! Im laughing through most of this! πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
        I’m glad that you could fiercely protect with your chappals … we would be safe against all types of creepy critters. But I would be kinder to a bee -gently coaxing him outside your window. For they are the pollinators of lovely flowers and through honey add so much sweetness to the world. Just as you add sweetness ….everywhere …my fine friend! πŸ’˜

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      14. Diana my chappals are my last resort, trust me you don’t want to trust me with them. I would be the scared bird Flapping its wings in front of her predator, nothing else. And bees trust me, they are the worst, they enter my room in summers and don’t even want to leave, then keep buzzing and scaring me till late hours, forcing me to stay hidden in my bed sheet or something if none of my family members come to my rescue.πŸ™ˆ

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      15. Oh that is different! That is not a single little guy coming to say hello… that is a more frightening infestation. That I would also fear. I also do not like anything buzzing about me tender ears when I am drifting off. One crafty mosquito can ruin my night … coming close to dance in my ear then hiding when the light goes on. A super frustrating scenario!

        Now I see you flapping your arms in my minds eye and I’m laughing again …. πŸ˜„πŸ˜„

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      16. More miserable rain expected, but I am going for tea with my neighbor in the morning. Very sweet lady who leaves me notes and chocolate treats at me door from time to time. Then I really should go for a run πŸƒπŸ» as I have been using the weather as an excuse …but it will be cold 3-4 degrees so maybe I will put it off again. πŸ˜‚

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      17. Awww sadly no rains here for now. I love them. The weather is around 10 degrees here and we still act more lazy than you so I can definitely understand your dilemma.
        And wow, this lady sounds so sweet. ❀️ ❀️ ❀️ Have funn with her love

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