poetry, prose

The Diary

89 Comments

perhaps

I did walk a mile in your shoes

borrowed as you slept

your soles

mine to peruse

finding a hole

in my argument

and blistered egos

like the chafed, constricted toes

of this awkwardly penned prose

 

perhaps

I did lay open your words

splaying book spine

cracking

a page at a time

hearing what you said

not what you meant

now only to lament

the denied comprehension

that invites a heart’s dissention

clutching the diary

Β you left behind

89 thoughts on “The Diary”

    1. What a truly nice thing to say Daffni! Sometimes I go back and do a similar thing on some of the older ones and find some new flavour – I guess subconsciously a writer throws a lot into the word bucket. And swirls it about!

      Liked by 1 person

      Reply

      1. Can I ask where is your Lost soul? 😝 I just happened to read your conversations with Priya on her blog Liebster Awards as your comment was just below me and her reply to your comment followed (I follow her and her writings are so serene and noble and yours too). You both shower so much of love on each other. I have never seen two people showering so much love on each other. And I always believed two girls affection and love for each other is the most pure and noble love on the planet. As, I have seen my sisters’ love for each other. But love,respect and affection you both have for each other is some form of Magic of Magical.

        TOUCHWOOD. TOUCHWOOD. TOUCHWOOD. And I did touch the wood while typing as some preach that we should touch the wood while we say touchwood.

        Liked by 2 people

      3. Many common points we have.

        ~ I was also imclined to her since beginning. She touches even the deepest of soul even by her words (Imagine how much loved she will make you feel if you visit her in her hometown – Chandigarh, India) I want you to visit her someday soon if you have few luxuries. Time the most important among them and then money. I need not ask you about intent and willingness. I can bet you have that even in your dreams. She will feel so so so so happy if you visit her. She will make you roam every street of Chandigarh. It is a lovely city with the most “Liveliest people of the world (PUNJABIS) “. Punjabis mostly belong to Sikh religion (I am not trying to differentiate people between religion and I never do that, but trust me Punjabis are free spirited and if you become a friend with any Punjabi, they will be your friend till death. I can assure that albeit there are always few exceptions in everything). Make Priya haapy anyway you can. She deserves so much of happiness, every happines she craves, she deserve it. She is soooooo pure.

        ~ I have 4 sisters and 1 brother (all 4 sisters are married now. I miss them badly now and every moment I spent with them in childhood. We were grown up by our parents in such a beautiful way like example, my dad used to bring one big steel box of Britannia cream biscuits. Every morning before going to school, either of my parent used to give 1 biscuit to each 6 of us. No one will ever get 2. 1 means 1. We never even used to complain or ask for 2. We were raised in such a disciplined way sincethe time I know. And during summers, it is mango season and dad used to bring mango. One mango was sliced everyday for us 6. Each one of us will get 1 slice each. And the hard thing which a mango has in centre (I can’t remember what they call it in English, in Hindi we call it “Gutli” haha, it is a very famous term and very craved part of mango to eat by everyone, the flavour of mango left on exterior part of it is love 😍) So Gutli anyone of us used to have randomly, as I was youngest my siblings used to give me that most of the times 😍 We were taught to share things by this.

        ~ Priya deserves every good thing of the world and everything she desires, wishes, prays, craves and even something she forgot to wish or pray.

        ~ And getting out of control is a sign that how comfortable you feel talking to each other. That’s the best sign.

        ~ And yeah, even I laughed while reading, you both are bound to laugh crazily while typing.
        Beware while talking to her while walking on the streets? You know why? Because you cannot control your laugh while you talk to her and people sees you laughing so crazily haha (Just intended as a joke on a lighter note haha)

        ~ Yeah, I love when I come across people like you two. You both are soooo good human beings and I am not lying even the single word I said. These are all my heartfelt emtions!!

        I hope your friendship with Priya grows in leaps and bounds every passing seconds and remain friends for life till death. God Bless two Beautiful and most Compassionate Souls πŸ˜‡

        Liked by 2 people

      4. This is such a delightful post to read Sachin. I can’t wait for Priya to eventually see it.
        And thank you for educating me about the Punjabi people and Chandigarh. Very interesting for me as your country is large and diverse.

        Liked by 2 people

      5. Awwww thank you so so very much for calling my heart eloquent. That is the biggest of the compliments I ever got and most important part is coming from someone who means every single word she says. I am elated that you feel such.

        Yeah, I find the Punjabis as the best humans across the planet. They are pure to the core. So pure and honest. And yes, our country is very diverse. If you travel from one state of India to another state of India, you will feel like you are in some other country because customs, traditions, religions and even languages are also different in every state. We have 36 different states (if we include 7 Union Territories as well). And you must plan to visit India sometime soon, the country is soooo beautiful. It will be a whole new experience for you. After visiting India, after you fly back to your country, you will realise that you hav left some part of your heart in India. You would miss so many wonderful and unforgettable memories you would have made during your visit to India. If you ever happen to visit, visit when you have sufficient time. Don’t come in haste as there are so many unique places to visit in India. I will be glad if you would love your visit to India.

        Thank you so much for all the lovely words you said. Your words touched my heart in big time, in no time!!

        Liked by 1 person

      6. You are welcome, Sachin, and deseve more positive words even!

        I love the pride and warmth you have for your country, your home. I have two close friends who when asked to name their favourite vacation (ever), both said India. For the culture, vivid colour and rich experiences. I always thought I would be fearful to travel alone to such a populated place, but you are such a great advocate for your land. How could I stay away, when some of the most special people I have met online are from India!
        In truth, I believe that the spiritual heart of the earth beats in India xxx

        Liked by 1 person

      7. Thank you so much for your kind words for me.

        TRUE. TRUE. TRUE. YOU DESCRIBED INDIA TRULY BY CALLING IT AS “SPIRITUAL HEART OF THE EARTH”. Not even Indians could describe India in such great way. Wowwwww. I loved it. Now I feel to write a “book on India” someday, if I happen to write that, it would be named “Spiritual Heart of Earth” and the one who gave this name to India it for the time time will get a big mention in the “Foreword of the book” πŸ‘† I do mean everything I say. I would write for my satisfaction and for the pride I have for my country!!

        Like

      8. And you are also not showing in my list of followers now. You were showing before. Check if you are following me or not. I sound cheesy by saying it, but I would love if the with the most beautiful words can read the blogs I write and if she can comment on them everytime I post new, my purpose of writing my heart out in my blogs would be served to my satisfaction.

        Like

      9. I will definitely try Sachin, but I must say that because of work commitments I may not be able to read all your posts as they are posted. For then I would have to stop sleeping πŸ™‚ I will be trying to catch up when I am on vacation days my friend. I truly appreciate your enthusiasm!

        Liked by 1 person

      12. Haha sorry sorry sorry. Got it. I got what to call you now Diana di 😊 I would definitely say I knew you were elder to me but just wanted to know to what extent so that I can use appropriate title in front of your name and sorry I will try not to ask a girl her age 😊

        Like

      14. You can read anytime you get time haha. From now on you need not justify things with reasons. I do understand if you that if you are not able to do something, it is becUse of some genuine reasons. You need not say that _____ . What should I call you haha? I have no idea as to how elder or younger you are to me or from which country you belong to haha πŸ˜…πŸ˜…

        Liked by 1 person

      16. How wonderful this would be Sachin. I would be one of the first people to purchase it as I feel you would be able to explain your country in great detail, and as one who truly loves his home.

        Liked by 1 person

      17. Hey, yes I see the problem but have no idea what has happened (I am not computer savvy), But it has been a delightful conversation, with much warmth and humor πŸ™‚ I shall remember it!

        Liked by 1 person

      18. Confused the server πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ Maybe it thought, we were aliens speaking out of the planet fairytale things πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

        And yeah, the Most Delightful Conversation with all sorts of emotions 😊 Thank you so much!!

        Like

      19. Your wait is finally over. Priya is here and she read it and called you an angel ‍❀️‍‍❀️‍‍❀️‍

        And I also say, Yeah Diana is a fairy tale angel I guess haha. Are we living in an illusionary world? I am doubting now hahaha. How come we are able to talk to an angel? Hahaha. Pata lagana padega CID wala Daya (priya sorry πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚)

        Like

      21. Thank you so much,is not enough to say how lucky I feel to have met you. But have to manage with it, there’s no other way round. So thank you so much Priya.

        And hey no, this is the first time I do not agree with your thought. I am way more blessed to meet you than you are blessed to meet me!!

        So I am more blessed than you hahaha!! Just a joke πŸ™‚

        Liked by 2 people

      22. Diana I am in so much love right now with you. Your Aura attracts me towards you. This means a lot to me. I truly wish to meet you in person. You are like a fairy. Like an angel god have sent to me ❀️❀️❀️

        Liked by 2 people

      24. You two always keep showing affection and showering the same love as you are today. I really wish for that. You two always be best friends, sisters, wellwisher, guide for each other on every important decisions you take in life (because I feel you both feel and think on same lines, so sharing advices will really work wonders) and have every possible relationship in this world.

        Liked by 2 people

      25. My smile is just glowing after reading these words! Such faith and support. I agree with you; I sometimes feel that I have been granted too much in life. So many in the world have come from homes truly broken or suffer health misfortunes. I have gratitude everyday! A have gratitude for meeting you also. Have a wonderful day Sachin πŸ™‚

        Like

      34. I don’t think you might have conjured a more beautiful thing to say Priya! I’m so touched by your words; it’s as if you are transparent and revealing your heart without any hesitation. You are a breath of the freshest air, sustaining happiness with your brightness. We shall most certainly meet in person, I have no doubt. πŸ™‚
        And then we will discuss the fine gentle soul Sachin and this wonderful conversation. ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀

        Liked by 2 people

      37. I love how you can appreciate two people with ease and with full of heart, feelings and emotions in just few lines. Your feelings and emotions are showing so openly in these few lines β™₯

        😚 Feel at Sweet Home When I talk to you two✨
        πŸ β€πŸ πŸ’ƒπŸ’›πŸƒπŸŽΆπŸŽΆ

        Like

  12. With this all I do see is you amidst of a green field with long grass that sways in sync with your heart beat as your eyes are fixed on the path not so trampled but a belief that this is where relief is going to welcome you again. You wait there clutching the diary against your chest. You love. You sigh. You wait. And a hopeful smile is what you bear!!

    I loved it Diana..<3 beautiful piece of poetry!!

    Liked by 1 person

    Reply

    1. I’m so happy that you not only read, but felt so profoundly to portray such a vivid scene. I close my eyes and I’m there Shefali ❀️ I can see the path you mention ….

      Liked by 1 person

      Reply

  14. I’ve got no words to express how beautiful this poem is. It is hard to walk in other’s shoes but it offers a different perspective on the matter, maybe “a hole in the argument” for the one that tries the “new” shoes. Thank you for sharing this! 🌈

    Liked by 1 person

    Reply

      1. Yeah I am so sorry love, just couldn’t get the time to read WordPress these days. I ll be going through all of them after exams.
        Don’t even ask about exam, I blanked out for half of it, even though I knew the answers before. πŸ™‚

        Liked by 1 person

  16. “Perhaps I did lay open your words splaying book spine cracking a page at a time” daaaaaaamnnnn that’s good. 😲 I agree with the person all the way up there. Your poetry does feel really natural and reads effortlessly!

    Liked by 1 person

    Reply

    1. Arbus! Oh how I’ve missed you❣️❣️❣️ But I’m still reeling from your spoken word brilliance πŸ˜ŠπŸ‘πŸ»πŸ’ž

      Like

      Reply

      1. I missed you too and got lost on my way! I kept putting off catching up on your writing because I like to be in the right state of mind to read you and have peace and quiet. I thought I had it now but I was wrong. I’ll be back! 😎 And thank you! Your thoughts on my stuff and things means a lot to me!!

        Liked by 1 person

      2. This is for you β€”β€”> πŸ€—. Be well and see you in a while! PS-I always reserve special moments for your compositions too. Quality needs to be savoured on a fresh palate 😌

        Like

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

Gravatar
WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. ( Log Out /  Change )

Google photo

You are commenting using your Google account. ( Log Out /  Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. ( Log Out /  Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. ( Log Out /  Change )

Cancel

Connecting to %s